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i've never seen you like this
lying open
unfathomable
empty and bare

your eyes the color of smoke
darkening everything you see
almost a signature

joy nor laughter
do i believe all
things go wrong
i'm not feeling happy
the sun is making it tough
to be vengeful

i've not had sex in four months
makes me feel deaf, blind, maybe i have cancer

you're dumb
for making me suffer
Craving.
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the sun is making it tough
to be vengeful


GREAT contrast.

I reached a four month lull at one time. It was very annoying. Relate-able.
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thetaoofchaos Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
"i've not had sex in four months
makes me feel deaf, blind, maybe i have cancer

you're dumb
for making me suffer"

this is really great!
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:iconiampoetry:
iamPoetry Jun 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconmrpoeticman:
Had too send this when I seen it. It suits me well and its so priceless :lick: lol Just trying to cheer you up gorgous
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iamPoetry Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Send?
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:iconsandy33311:
I love every word.

In your comments, "Craving" - same here. (Don't you sometimes wish that you were like women who can live without sex? I'd rather be like me, but sometimes..............................)
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iamPoetry Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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:iconmrpoeticman:
Thats very deep and from the soul girl, I feel your struggle.
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iamPoetry Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:) It's not a struggle, just an annoyance.
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