literature

love spiral

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Literature Text

heaven sleeps
                   as we make love
                                         on earth
                                                   under a night clear sky
                                                                                  buried hands
                                                                                                   in skin make sweet
                                                                                                                              melodious                                
                                                                                                                      moans
                                                                                           instrument the room
                                                    like a song not fully learned
                            half remembered
                                                  attentive and percipient listening
                                                                                               wave within way
Every comment to my poetry is more than welcome and I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks.
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Most of typographically interesting poetry is not interesting as poetry; but your poem is highly exceptional---both typographically interesting and beautifully erotic.