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strangest man
helps me dream

fills my brain to its
brim
with dangerous thoughts,
thoughts that only happen when you
let                 
go

he encourages me
to eat chocolate for breakfast

once told me
flowers hold summer
  that i look amazing barefoot
    how my hair shines like
       beeswax

can't pry from him
he's a tree
with deep roots

someone diff er ent
yet softly similar

rushing words unsure
slightly unsteady
my heart he resides

a vulture

whom i always rediscover



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He's sold out.

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:iconitsxmagik:
This is a really lovely read :aww:

he encourages me
to eat chocolate for breakfast


That part is just so cute!

once told me
flowers hold summer
that i look amazing barefoot
how my hair shines like
beeswax
makes my stomach go
merry go 'round


My favourite part.
It makes me feel like it's summer again.

I like how you spaced out different, too.


--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconiampoetry:
I thought you were going to fave and fun. Glad you commented, I love them just as much.

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Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconliduen-kvaedhi:
I like the effect your spacing gives, I have to try that sometime.

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#WLC
#WeEmote
#dAmnEpic

<3<3<3<3
:iconiampoetry:
I've learned it does marvelous things. Please do so.

Thanks for reading this!

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconliduen-kvaedhi:
I think I will tomorrow :D

--
#WLC
#WeEmote
#dAmnEpic

<3<3<3<3
:iconitsxmagik:
Me too! I try to comment on everything that I fave.
And comment on the things that I don't fave, too.


--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconyouinventedme:
my heart he resides

a vulture

whom i always rediscover

that's a terrific bit

I rather like this
thoughts that happen when you
let
go

he encourages me
to eat chocolate for breakfast

once told me
flowers hold summer

too

xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconiampoetry:
I nit pick things if I don't fave something but read it.

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconiampoetry:
Good. I'll be checking.

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry

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