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She cries.

Reveals each tear
implacable for return.

Delicate light becomes dinner
to the dark, the stars, the depth
of space.

She was told
time would heal,
time will overcome;
but time
will never
be
enough.
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NaPo 17

Even though this is short, this means so much to me, and I am very proud of this poem.

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:iconnightgrid:
Delicate light becomes dinner
to the dark, the stars, the depth
of space
:heart:
ohhhhhhhhh.
:iconiampoetry:
I think this is the best out of most of my poetry.

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconyokopyro:
simple and yet so powerful.
Don't ever change it, please. Well done!

--
Watermelons.
:+fav: With Love!!
:iconmoondrunk:
i peddle
my delusions
to silhouettes
and passing car lights
and god, my god
this confusion
is killing all my fight

--
"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
:iconlaurynnelizabeth:
Beautiful.... I agree with YokoPyro; simple, yet very powerful. I absolutely love it :heart:
:iconsocially-suicidal:
Absolutely fantastic, this is really beautiful :O

--
You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

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:iconitsxmagik:
My word, this is freaking fantastic.
Beautiful, to say the least.
:rose:


--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconliduen-kvaedhi:
Delicate light becomes dinner
to the dark, the stars, the depth
of space.

Oh my! What a genius line you have there!

--
#WLC
#WeEmote
#dAmnEpic

<3<3<3<3
:iconthetaoofchaos:
"light becomes dinner
to the dark"

i can sense the freedom of this - you've held nothing back and forced nothing through

clearly your best of which i've read

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us

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