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The Red-Faced Barn by ~IAmPoetry:iconIAmPoetry:





snow, peppers

a red-faced
barn

glazed with sun
shine

abreast the tire
swing

----

And yet,
rain

would be beautifully
indifferent




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Author's Comments

Inspired by William Carlos. He's forever.

______


I know it's simple, but it was piercing the big blue sky and I had to write about it.

Constructive criticism welcomed, but I discourage dissecting my poem and mending it your style.

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:iconyouinventedme:
lovely

and I'm a wcw fan, which I think I've
mentioned before. haha.


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconkennethsnow:
nice...simple is :clap:

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:peace:
:iconiampoetry:
I believe so :)

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconitsxmagik:
I can just picture this in my mind.
Lovely writing :clap:


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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconterribletreasure:
Lovely!

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A poem is a naked person... Some people say that I am a poet.
Bob Dylan

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:iconvergil59:
i was thinkin' Williams before I read your notes. i love the terse, rich imagery in this one.
:iconjazzman1989:
You are so very well read and incorporate their styles into your own so well.

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:
:iconiampoetry:
:bow:

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconiampoetry:
I try at least.

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry

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