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teakettle throbs
neck vessel whistles
come-hither
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NotenSMSK's avatar
a 3-5-3 haiku. I personally would have liked to see a title since for Haiku's and 6 word stories I prefer having the title as something that compliments or explains the work. Other than that, I like the work but it also seems to lack some punctuation I think ^^;